My songs

[Talantante]

Hi evrybody ! I'm 14 years old and I've been playing piano for 1 year and a half...
There's my songs who are very short and i want some opinions ...
Here's a description of my song :
1 : Here's a composition of mine
2 : Another composition
3 : Like the others but the end strangely sounds like "endless sacrifice"...;-)
4 : Guess what ! The same thing but with my brother who's playing drum for 4 years ( the end strangely sounds like "New Millenium Cyanide Christ"by Meshuggah ...=)

http://www.dance-industries.com/
And then in the "Search by" box , in the artist's box , put : llamo

Enjoy !

[Talantante]

Ok ...
I feel alone ...

[Talantante]

Hey guys ! Anybody can answer me please ?:-(

[Piranha]

Be patient, and people will actually listen to your music.

[Piranha]

Typing llamo in the Artist search box only brings me to 3 piano songs, none of them with drums or guitar.

[merijn]

^ that's true.

[Talantante]

if there's no song 4 , it's an error of mine because i don't have enough memory to put this on my account
sorry
btw what do you think about this songs ?

[keyboardfox]

Hey there Dude!

I listened to your tracks and thought you really had some good ideas. One thing I think I can comment on is the use of sustain, or the reverb. Try to release the sustain just before you play the next chord. Especially on track two when you move from the D flat to the B. It should make it sound much more fluent and haromincally pleasing ^^.

Great compositions though!

KF

[ImaX]

Nice - I like the melodic parts in it!

You should try to practise your left hand for playing smoother - you don't have to play crazy parts on the left, just try to hit the nots with more feeling to make it fit better into the song.

[Talantante]

thx for yours advices guys !!:)