Smoke on the water final solo

[Sk]

Ok, me and my band are going to play Smoke on the water by Deep Purple, and when we came to work out a decent outro I played this ending riff. It is played after the third chorus, after the standard couple of the well-known SOTW riff, and it is followed by the outro like in the live version (Stockholm). I think it can do, still I'd really appreciate if you people out there (who are quite more expert than me) could give me some advice. I recorded it when I was home, so it's just the keyboard part; the "base" should be the pattern played under the guitar solo in the middle of the song. Rate it and don't be too harsh on my poor creation! :D

http://sk84.altervista.org/sotw-endsolo.mp3

[Drusillus]

Hey man,

Is there something wrong with your MP3? Winamp crashes when I try to play it, and Windows Media Player complains that the file extension doesn't match the file type...

[hephiroth]

yeah, when i tried to listen it just took me to some page in italian i think....

-jeff-

[Sk]

Try this one: low-fi wav version (http://sk84.altervista.org/sotwend-demo-lofi.wav). I didn't get any error...

[Sk]

Bump. :)
Any impressions? (You can tell me "it really sucks", I need also this kind of things you know)

[MoonDark]

Can't download man :S

[Sk]

Ok, thanks. I definitely have to try and fix this.