Metropolis Part 1 section attempt

[Richard]

Hi

I'm quite new here but i was hoping someone could give me some feedback on my attempt at the first instrumental part of metropolis part 1. There are a few mistakes and a dodgy bend at the end but apart from that any comments are very welcome.

ta

http://www.intrinsicmusic.co.uk/richmusic/metropolispt1effort.mp3

[Mago_Lari]

Hey..its good! you should try to play in a more legato way your quartine scale but its good..keep the way!!

Clau

[merijn]

This is very good! An excellent piece. Keep it coming!

[Richard]

cool, cheers, i did this random proglead style section to practise improvised keyboard lead but after about 20 takes, this is as good as i could get. Any advice for soloing? I know i can play some things better but its difficult to think quick enough to fit everything in.

Anyway, here it is...

http://www.intrinsicmusic.co.uk/richmusic/proglead%20shortsong.mp3

Feedback much appreciated

Ta

[gusjdt]

Cool, I enjoyed it. :D

[Michael Troy]

Very nice! Did you learn that by ear? That's really amazing. I'm gonna go try to learn it myself now with the half speed machine. I'm inspired. Thanx. Rock on!!